*sigh*
Another bad book by Tijan YAY
She was able to make bad even a novella YAY
So.... what i hated? well...all of it ?
-Dead Fiance
-He meets the h at the morgue YAY
-She falls for him while he is broken over his dead fiance body YAY
-She becomes obsessed with him even when they never see each others the next 9 months YAY
-He is grieving Melissa for more than half of this novella YAY
-He was seeing Melissa when he had sex with the women after her YAY (being 9 months)
-The night at the club before seeing each others again he had his fingers in a OW YAY all on PAGE YAY,he then gets to kidnap and touch the h, and all the time i was thinking if he even washed his hands , bleah.
-She is kidnapped by him and all she thinks is how hot and yummy he is and had sex with him like hours later...
-No fucking connection, no build up , NOTHING! THEY Just fall in love out of nowhere literally , how romantic
- After a few round of sex he stops her and tells her ''it used to be like this with Melissa too'' wow, thanks for remarking again how much he freaking loved and still love his dead ex
-After a few days or whatever they tell each others that they fall in love and guess what???
TIME APART because he doesn't want to risk again losing someone who he loves ,and put her and her family at risk, whatever.
-They meet again 6 months later....celibate during separation (thanks for that) but at this point who cares...he come back to her because he finds out that she got hospitalized 3 times during that 6 months...her obsession, depression and nightmares made her lose 30 pounds and got anemic ...yep..again,if not, would've they reconnect?
-No couple time, only in the freaking epilogue
AMAZING love story, yay.
The only good parts of it where Jonah and his brothers, and that epilogue, that's it.
Sometimes i saw something good that had potential evolving , so many times this story could've been saved BUT THE AUTHOR did none of that.
The novella's are supposed to be different.
We just needed less time with him grieving and more time of them connect and get to know each others,a little here and there. I loved how sweet Jonah was. This could've been wayyyy better.
Disappointed BUT at the same time, i knew it. Because Tijan will never write good as she did in her past unfortunately.