I rreally like the game. The story is sometimes hard to follow. I fell like it jumps around alot and leaves some questions out in the open. A good example of this is Nicole at the end of ch6 randomly losing her shit and not really getting an anwser as to wtf triggered it. Then it jumps to the ball room at the end. However I do really enjoy this story. Keep up the good work!
I noticed that with MBIML for sure, sometimes it feels a bit schizophrenic
Also will randomly introduce characters or lore like it expects you already know about it or forgets it didn't establish it earlier, not just the connections between the two games.
Definitely feels like it needs a proofread, especially since it's 99% story scenes and barely any lewd ones
But that's a relatively minor thing, still enjoying both of them a lot, it's not Eternum level but I'd definitely put it up there with cosy cafe/house in the rift/harem hotel as like A+ tier stuff